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“Willowbreeze?”

She was curled in her nest, their three kits huddled against her belly. She lifted her head as Crookedstar called her name. “You came.”

He crouched beside the nest, brushing her cheek with his muzzle. “Brambleberry wouldn’t let me in before now. But I’ve been outside all the time.”

“Has it been long?” Willowbreeze’s eyes were streaming. Her muzzle was damp. She coughed weakly, making her whole body shudder.

“No,” Crookedstar whispered. “Not long.”

Willowbreeze gazed into his eyes. “I’m sorry.”

He tipped his head on one side. “Why?”

“For leaving you to raise our daughters.”

“You’re not going anywhere!” Crookedstar pressed his cheek hard against hers. “I won’t let you leave me.”

“You’ll be a wonderful father.” A purr rumbled in her throat, making her cough again. This time she struggled to get her breath. “I’m so happy Hailstar brought me back from WindClan. I’ve loved being with you and with RiverClan.”

“Don’t talk like that!” Crookedstar fought to keep the panic from his mew. The kits were lifting their heads, turning their muzzles toward him, straining to open their eyes. “You can’t leave the kits. They need you.” I need you.

“Oh, my precious love.” Willowbreeze brushed her muzzle along his twisted jaw. “Be brave for me, please.”

“You’re going to be fine!”

“Help me name our daughters.”

Numbness crept beneath Crookedstar’s pelt, deadening his heart, slowing his thoughts. Willowbreeze was right. Their daughters needed names. He reached a paw into the nest and touched the darkest gray kit. “Minnowkit,” he murmured. He already knew what it would be. He’d planned their names days ago as he paced the clearing.

“Minnowkit,” Willowbreeze echoed with a wheeze.

“And Willowkit.” Crookedstar stroked the smoky black kit. “I want her to have your name.”

Willowkit mewled and caught hold of his paw, churning her hind legs against his pad. Purring, he shook her off gently and touched the palest of the three.

“And this is Silverkit.”

“Silverkit.” Willowbreeze relaxed against him, her cheek resting on his. “They are lovely names.” Her breathing eased. Curling herself around her kits, she rested her nose on her paws and closed her eyes.

Crookedstar buried his muzzle in her pelt. “You rest now, my lovely.” He slid into the nest and wrapped himself around her. “I’ll keep you warm.” He closed his eyes and breathed in her soft scent.

“Crookedstar?” The den rustled as Brambleberry crept in. She leaned into the nest and touched his pelt. “I heard the names you gave your kits. They’re beautiful.”

He lifted his head. How long have I been here?

Brambleberry’s mew was no more than a breath. “I’m so sorry. Willowbreeze has gone.”

Remake of: [link]
Scene from the Warriors book Crookedstar's Promise, possibly the saddest.

Exert (C) Erin Hunter, Crookedstar's Promise
Art (C) Scarwolf11
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!Painmistress Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not only was that sad, two of his daughters died.
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~Scarwolf11 Apr 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I know
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Mood: Sadness ~Senthafang Apr 20, 2013  Student Artist
NOOOOO I CRIED AT this scene don't please Why Why did she have to die.
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~Scarwolf11 Apr 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I don't know D:
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~SmartAmericanGirl Mar 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh my gosh that scene was just
FEELS
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~Scarwolf11 Mar 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I know! D:
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~KayaKittyArtist Feb 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Mpleshade!!!!!!! > : O
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~KayaKittyArtist Feb 8, 2013  Student General Artist
sadfaceplz noooooooo!!!!!!!
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~FrostStormClaw Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so damn fucking sad :iconsadfaceplz:

And this picture is so damn flipping awesome :iconcryforeverplz:
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~Scarwolf11 Feb 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks XD
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